Matthew R’s dream poam

November 22, 2007

I may be dreaming but wouldn’t it be great if…

I could own a gold house with edible furniture,

A toffee TV, caramel carpets and minty mats.

But no doubt there would be a plague of rats

I may be dreaming but wouldn’t it be great if…

I could own a football team that would win every time

And Champions of the world with a skilful team.

That would be my fantastic dream.

I may be dreaming but wouldn’t it be great if….

I got a PS3 I would play the grim adventures of Billy and Mandy

Much much better than watching Andy pandy.

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6 Comments Add your own

1. joshua | November 26th, 2007 at 10:02 am

hello it is joshua nice poem it is good.
2. Mrs Campbell-Morgan | November 26th, 2007 at 1:37 pm

Thank you for your comment Joshua. I hope that you are enjoying secondary school. I agree that the poem is nice with a good attempt at rhyming.
3. sarah and megan | November 27th, 2007 at 5:54 am

hi mathew its sarah and megan we would also like to own a gold house. !!! ££££££
4. Leila and Carys | November 28th, 2007 at 10:22 am

Hi,
We love this poem, it’s a dream come true!
5. [BLOCKED BY STBV] billy m&hellip | December 21st, 2007 at 2:59 pm

billy martin 1972…

Man i just love your blog, keep the cool posts comin…..
6. Dawn Morrison | March 27th, 2009 at 6:20 pm

Brill poem matt – mum & dad

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