Dean’s ghost story

June 19, 2008

Ghost story

 

One day my family and I went on holiday too see my aunty in Lester. We were staying in a caravan next to an old church and graveyard.

 At midnight my brothers and I decided to go and explore to see if the story was real about it being haunted. As we walked through the graveyard, we could hear this strange scratching, squeaky noise behind us and every time we looked behind us the noise stopped. Suddenly my brother screamed saying there was a big white shape flying past the door Of the church. He looked at the door. “There is nothing there so don’t be stupid Lewis” said Ryan. We walked through the church door there was a big bang the door had shut “oh my god!” shouted Lewis. Ryan said “shut up Lewis we are in a church”

 All of a sudden it went cold and the windows started to rattle, I was very scared. I asked Ryan if we could go back he said “no, we will just go on to the next room.” There was a big ghost, we all ran as fast as we could back to the caravan but it still chased us.

Suddenly I woke up then  my dad woke up, he looked out the window. There was nothing there but we got in the car and never came back again and a few weeks later my aunty moved house up in Aberdeen.                     

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4 Comments Add your own

  • 1.    Jane  |  June 19th, 2008 at 2:44 pm

    Great story Dean, glad to see you finished it!
    Jane

  • 2.    Cherie Smither  |  June 24th, 2008 at 3:21 am

    What an awesome story Dean….good enough to put on the television! Hello from Palmerston North, New Zealand

  • 3.    joanna  |  June 26th, 2008 at 6:29 am

    hi i thought your ghost story was real funny and very long it was also very good

  • 4.    megan and caitlin  |  June 26th, 2008 at 6:53 am

    thats a great story you’ve worked hard on it we can tell well done!!!!!!

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