Evacuee poems

February 6, 2009




Today we have been working on how to write poems about what it would feel to have been an  evacuee in world war 2 . Here is Cameron B’s poem

Waterworks flooding

Around my eyes

I’m not the only one

Who is starting to cry

 

A mixture of feelings

Lone and sad

And all around

I feel completely bad

 

I’m as lonely as a fish

At the bottom of the sea

And when picking

They ignore me

 

Manky, mucky scumbag

A man said to me

Then came a lady

Who asked me to come to tea

I’m finally an evacuee.

 

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  • 1.    CameronM123  |  February 11th, 2009 at 7:45 am

    I Absoloutly Love Your Poem It is Brilliant And You R A Great Writer.

    Cameron. : D

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