kimberley’s evacuee poem

February 12, 2009




The feelings of an evacuee

September 1st 1939

Today, I can hear,

Children talk as loudly as a  bomb exploding.

Today I can smell

a field like a beautiful garden of flowers.

Today,I can feel

the  floor as cold as snow on a winters day.

Today I can see

People passing by like a rushing river, long and wide

Today Inside I feel

myself crying like a waterfall running down a cliff.

I am an evacuee in the train station waiting for someone to pick me!

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  • 1.    Kim Pericles  |  February 20th, 2009 at 5:53 am

    Hi Kimberley
    Your poem is great :)
    I can really understand how alone you are feeling.
    Well done!

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