Jamie’s Blitz Poem
March 20, 2009
We came out from our Anderson shelter
And our bodies were starting to swelter
Holes where the bombs had hit
People covered with sweat and grit
Fire burning day and night
Causing everlasting light
Terror struck at our hearts
The world suddenly seemed very dark
The remaning houses stood tall and proud
While the rubble of the rest lay on the ground
People were screaming and crying too
A girl survived whose family made shoes
It turns into a horrible night
Whenever the German bombers take flight!
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Pam Cranford | March 24th, 2009 at 7:43 pm
You have a great talent, Jamie. Please keep writing.
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p6loirston | March 26th, 2009 at 5:26 am
wow jamie! this is great.
It’s realy dramatic and gives you the real feel of what it was like coming out of a anderson shelter after were you lived had been bombed!
You are also realy good at thinking up rhyming words!
Congratulations.
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