Primary 7A at Loirston

We wrote articles for a traveller’s guide

May 25, 2009

This is a piece of writing Kieran did for level D proof. He is hoping to get Level D this term. What do you think? (Comment and say.) 

Dunolly adventure

Dunolly is an adventure it has beautiful landscape, a peaceful river and a gentle breeze. It is in aberfelldy, which is in Perth, and it’s a peaceful town. Dunolly is about 37 meters from a small town and is beside a forest and a river.

There is a few friendly staff that does all the activities         every day whether it’s gruellingly cold or blistering hot. They are well trained and are skilled in safety. They are very fun and friendly even with harsh weather and long hours.

Dunolly is a family place and has plenty of room. There is a mansion and a cottage for guests and staff to use. Families who go may pick any room they want but p7 pupils have to say whom they would like and the staff’s tries and work out the best rooms.

In Dunolly there are many activities from archery to rafting. Pupils must do 3 activities a day but families do as much as they want to. Lots of activities are tricky but fun and enjoyable.

Dunolly is a fun filled adventure so it’s a great place. It does birthdays, anniversaries and reunions and more events. Its rated 10/10 and more from schools and businesses so it’s great and fun.

By Kieran

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