Comments on: We wrote articles for a traveller’s guide http://p6loirston.edublogs.org/2009/05/25/kierans-level-d-travellers-guide/ A blog to display the work of Primary 7A at Loirston. Wed, 11 Nov 2009 04:43:49 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.2 hourly 1 By: Ailsa and Megan http://p6loirston.edublogs.org/2009/05/25/kierans-level-d-travellers-guide/comment-page-1/#comment-394 Ailsa and Megan Wed, 27 May 2009 10:44:48 +0000 http://p6loirston.edublogs.org/?p=383#comment-394 we think this is a level D piece of writing it ives us good information about dunnolly! we think this is a level D piece of writing it ives us good information about dunnolly!

]]> By: kimberley http://p6loirston.edublogs.org/2009/05/25/kierans-level-d-travellers-guide/comment-page-1/#comment-391 kimberley Wed, 27 May 2009 10:21:39 +0000 http://p6loirston.edublogs.org/?p=383#comment-391 its really cool i wish i done my one as good as you bey!!!!! its really cool i wish i done my one as good as you

bey!!!!!

]]> By: Mrs Campbell-Morgan http://p6loirston.edublogs.org/2009/05/25/kierans-level-d-travellers-guide/comment-page-1/#comment-389 Mrs Campbell-Morgan Mon, 25 May 2009 18:10:28 +0000 http://p6loirston.edublogs.org/?p=383#comment-389 Kieran your work is well organised in paragraphs and is written in the style of a guide. Well done! Could you just check it all over and see that your punctuation is all in place? Kieran your work is well organised in paragraphs and is written in the style of a guide. Well done! Could you just check it all over and see that your punctuation is all in place?

]]> By: kieran and andrew http://p6loirston.edublogs.org/2009/05/25/kierans-level-d-travellers-guide/comment-page-1/#comment-388 kieran and andrew Mon, 25 May 2009 10:49:26 +0000 http://p6loirston.edublogs.org/?p=383#comment-388 I think i did realy well writing that but i want you to have your say. I think i did realy well writing that but i want you to have your say.

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