Megan’s guide

May 25, 2009

This is a piece of writing Megan did for level D proof. She is hoping to getLevel D this term. What do you think? (Comment and say.)

Sorrento

Sorrento in Italy is a stunning and gorgeous place to go on holiday. In the evening guests can see a wonderful sunset over Mt. Vesuvius.

The weather in Sorrento is warm but not to hot.

In the morning visitors will either be chilly or very warm. But 11am-2pm is the hottest time in the day.

In the evening tourists will experience lovely Italian weather.

In Sorrento you can either go into the small and friendly village, Go site seeing or just laze about in your room. If guests wish they can go for a stroll up Mt. Vesuvius and look down on the great mountain its self.

The food in Sorrento is fresh and tasty, and filled with flavour. For lunch Tourists might want to go down to the local pizzeria for a hand made pizza. After which they may want to enjoy a delicious and creamy ice cream. For dinner tourists may wish to go to one of the many restaurants placed around Sorrento.

The Italian life style is a friendly one where in each village everyone knows everyone and they just walk around and talk to one and other. When guests enter Sorrento they will feel right at home.

To go to Sorrento is a dream holiday for anyone

By Megan

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6 Comments Add your own

1. Mrs Campbell-Morgan | May 25th, 2009 at 2:14 pm

Well done, Megan. Well organised writing. Your guide makes me want to visit Sorrento! You might want to look again at the sentence about chilly or hot mornings and explain why that is. Superb work!
2. Jamie | May 27th, 2009 at 6:22 am

This is a great travel guide it makes me want to go to sorrento
3. aimee | May 27th, 2009 at 6:30 am

hi megan good worki i think it is fantastic!!!

i thik you could of used more ajectives but it was really good
4. rebecca | May 27th, 2009 at 6:51 am

megan i found this very very heart warming
5. owen | May 27th, 2009 at 7:10 am

i think you have met above your target and have used simple criteria
6. Rachel | July 1st, 2009 at 11:40 am

Well Done Megan I like your story you put in alot of description

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