http://p6loirston.edublogs.org/2009/05/27/dunnoly-house/ A blog to display the work of Primary 7A at Loirston. Wed, 11 Nov 2009 04:43:49 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.2 hourly 1 http://p6loirston.edublogs.org/2009/05/27/dunnoly-house/comment-page-1/#comment-401 Mrs Campbell-Morgan Wed, 27 May 2009 17:21:55 +0000 http://p6loirston.edublogs.org/?p=386#comment-401 This is an excellent article for a traveller's guide, Matthew. The targets are met- good introduction, present tense used, very good description and well organised paragraphs. Well done. There are some punctuation mistakes that you could check. This is an excellent article for a traveller’s guide, Matthew. The targets are met- good introduction, present tense used, very good description and well organised paragraphs. Well done. There are some punctuation mistakes that you could check.

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